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	<title>Comments for Inventing The Universe</title>
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		<title>Comment on Revision by Robert W. Leonard</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robert W. Leonard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jul 2010 16:17:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fantastic, it sounds like you will have some pretty great characters by the end! I really like your approach. I do something similar, but not quite so in-depth. I also do very detailed outlines and flow charts. Not only for characters, but for the rooms they&#039;ll sit in, look at who they are and how they would decorate a room. I think you can often get away with not talking about aspects of your characters, if you can show them through decorating styles, personality, etc. We&#039;ll see how it works out on the final edit that is about to begin! Good luck on yours as well. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic, it sounds like you will have some pretty great characters by the end! I really like your approach. I do something similar, but not quite so in-depth. I also do very detailed outlines and flow charts. Not only for characters, but for the rooms they&#8217;ll sit in, look at who they are and how they would decorate a room. I think you can often get away with not talking about aspects of your characters, if you can show them through decorating styles, personality, etc. We&#8217;ll see how it works out on the final edit that is about to begin! Good luck on yours as well. :)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Revision by Van</title>
		<link>http://jkoyanagi.com/2010/07/22/revision/comment-page-1/#comment-1306</link>
		<dc:creator>Van</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Jul 2010 00:21:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Aaah, how I wish I had a printer capable of printing like that. One of the best things I ever did was invest in a print out of one of my novels. It makes the editing process so much easier for some reason. I just don&#039;t have the money for an ink jet here, let alone the paper and ink and all of that.  I manage with what I do have, but printing each scene or chapter would really be nice.

I wouldn&#039;t say my methods are as intensive as yours, but there are some parallels. I used to hate outlining as a young writer, and now I never start a story unless I know, at least roughly, the beginning, middle and end. (And often much more.)  I wonder sometimes how writers manage to tell coherent stories without plotting at least to some degree!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Aaah, how I wish I had a printer capable of printing like that. One of the best things I ever did was invest in a print out of one of my novels. It makes the editing process so much easier for some reason. I just don&#8217;t have the money for an ink jet here, let alone the paper and ink and all of that.  I manage with what I do have, but printing each scene or chapter would really be nice.</p>
<p>I wouldn&#8217;t say my methods are as intensive as yours, but there are some parallels. I used to hate outlining as a young writer, and now I never start a story unless I know, at least roughly, the beginning, middle and end. (And often much more.)  I wonder sometimes how writers manage to tell coherent stories without plotting at least to some degree!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Revision by Josh</title>
		<link>http://jkoyanagi.com/2010/07/22/revision/comment-page-1/#comment-1304</link>
		<dc:creator>Josh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 20:46:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s always fun to see how other folks tackle revisions, or any part of the writing process. You&#039;ve got quite the system worked out!

For me, I attack it in waves. The first is the main pass-through after original draft is complete. Here, I attack main plotholes, look for consistency, polish any obvious mistakes and fix things I thought of as I was writing it. When I&#039;m in the middle of a draft, I don&#039;t tend to go back and work on prior bits so I can keep up the forward momentum.

Then, once it&#039;s presentable, I give it to readers and also post chapters on the online writing workshop I am part of. Once I get enough feedback from them, I draw up a revision checklist and start tackling the issues one at a time. After this overhaul, it&#039;s one more pass through to again look for consistency issues the editing might&#039;ve caused. After that, it&#039;s usually fine-tuning/tweaking as I notice things or get further feedback.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s always fun to see how other folks tackle revisions, or any part of the writing process. You&#8217;ve got quite the system worked out!</p>
<p>For me, I attack it in waves. The first is the main pass-through after original draft is complete. Here, I attack main plotholes, look for consistency, polish any obvious mistakes and fix things I thought of as I was writing it. When I&#8217;m in the middle of a draft, I don&#8217;t tend to go back and work on prior bits so I can keep up the forward momentum.</p>
<p>Then, once it&#8217;s presentable, I give it to readers and also post chapters on the online writing workshop I am part of. Once I get enough feedback from them, I draw up a revision checklist and start tackling the issues one at a time. After this overhaul, it&#8217;s one more pass through to again look for consistency issues the editing might&#8217;ve caused. After that, it&#8217;s usually fine-tuning/tweaking as I notice things or get further feedback.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Revision by Jamie D.</title>
		<link>http://jkoyanagi.com/2010/07/22/revision/comment-page-1/#comment-1303</link>
		<dc:creator>Jamie D.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Jul 2010 19:52:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. That&#039;s quite the in-depth process you have! I&#039;m always in awe of writers like you, who steep themselves in the story several times over. I can&#039;t - I have to take advantage of the idea when it&#039;s fresh to draft it, and then come at it with a completely different &quot;editing&quot; mindset once it&#039;s done. Once I write &quot;the end&quot;, I know how it ends, and for me, that ends the &quot;creative&quot; part. After that, my logical side takes over to finish it up. 

I outline enough to get me started, just basic points and some main scenes...and then I just start writing and don&#039;t stop until it&#039;s done. I print out a hard copy and go through making edit and revision notes, then type my changes in. The first draft goes to betas so I can incorporate their comments into my hard-copy pass (or not, depending), then after the type-in, it&#039;s back out to final readers and a line-editor. One more pass to get anything taken care of that the final readers/editor marked, and that&#039;s it. Or that&#039;s the direction I&#039;m heading anyways (just about to the final reader/edit part).  If I did much more than that, I&#039;d overwork it. Just my nature. :-)

Sounds like you&#039;re enjoying the process...good luck! :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. That&#8217;s quite the in-depth process you have! I&#8217;m always in awe of writers like you, who steep themselves in the story several times over. I can&#8217;t &#8211; I have to take advantage of the idea when it&#8217;s fresh to draft it, and then come at it with a completely different &#8220;editing&#8221; mindset once it&#8217;s done. Once I write &#8220;the end&#8221;, I know how it ends, and for me, that ends the &#8220;creative&#8221; part. After that, my logical side takes over to finish it up. </p>
<p>I outline enough to get me started, just basic points and some main scenes&#8230;and then I just start writing and don&#8217;t stop until it&#8217;s done. I print out a hard copy and go through making edit and revision notes, then type my changes in. The first draft goes to betas so I can incorporate their comments into my hard-copy pass (or not, depending), then after the type-in, it&#8217;s back out to final readers and a line-editor. One more pass to get anything taken care of that the final readers/editor marked, and that&#8217;s it. Or that&#8217;s the direction I&#8217;m heading anyways (just about to the final reader/edit part).  If I did much more than that, I&#8217;d overwork it. Just my nature. :-)</p>
<p>Sounds like you&#8217;re enjoying the process&#8230;good luck! :-)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Conference by Portia Sisco</title>
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		<dc:creator>Portia Sisco</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jun 2010 17:40:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, I am seriously interested in this! The fact that it&#039;s in Colorado is a huge bonus :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, I am seriously interested in this! The fact that it&#8217;s in Colorado is a huge bonus :-)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Conference by Eisley Jacobs</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eisley Jacobs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Jun 2010 02:24:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I will be there ;) HIDE! ;)</description>
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		<title>Comment on Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Conference by Carolina Valdez-Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carolina Valdez-Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Jun 2010 18:59:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This sounds fantastic. I&#039;d love to go. But I&#039;m already doing 3 this year, so it would be hard to justify. But, I look forward to hearing about it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This sounds fantastic. I&#8217;d love to go. But I&#8217;m already doing 3 this year, so it would be hard to justify. But, I look forward to hearing about it!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers Conference by Simon L.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Simon L.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jun 2010 18:44:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>AAAHH!!! I WANT TO GO!

Also, this would offer me an opportunity to slum in Boulder with my bro, but still. I need to do a writers&#039; conference!

*begins plotting*</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>AAAHH!!! I WANT TO GO!</p>
<p>Also, this would offer me an opportunity to slum in Boulder with my bro, but still. I need to do a writers&#8217; conference!</p>
<p>*begins plotting*</p>
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		<title>Comment on nook by Leah</title>
		<link>http://jkoyanagi.com/2010/06/14/nook/comment-page-1/#comment-1170</link>
		<dc:creator>Leah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 12:40:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi!  I&#039;m a little late to this party, but I have a 2nd gen. Kindle with a 6&quot; screen.  

Things I like about it:
I love the portability of it, and I love having tons of reading material in one simple, lightweight reader.  I also like the e-ink because I can read for much longer without it hurting my eyes.  And since I was in grad school when I got it - and since I still have access to my university&#039;s online journal database and love reading journal articles, I love being able to send pdfs and Word docs to the Kindle.  I haven&#039;t researched other e-readers, so I&#039;m not sure if they have this feature, as well.  Highlighting is easy - just a click and drag of the side button, and I can store all my &quot;clippings&quot; in an accessible folder for later review.

Things I wish it had:
- E-library
- Free in-store reading!  That&#039;s a really awesome thing about the nook.  Granted, Amazon doesn&#039;t have a &quot;store&quot; but it would be great if they could work out a deal with Starbucks or something.  I would love that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!  I&#8217;m a little late to this party, but I have a 2nd gen. Kindle with a 6&#8243; screen.  </p>
<p>Things I like about it:<br />
I love the portability of it, and I love having tons of reading material in one simple, lightweight reader.  I also like the e-ink because I can read for much longer without it hurting my eyes.  And since I was in grad school when I got it &#8211; and since I still have access to my university&#8217;s online journal database and love reading journal articles, I love being able to send pdfs and Word docs to the Kindle.  I haven&#8217;t researched other e-readers, so I&#8217;m not sure if they have this feature, as well.  Highlighting is easy &#8211; just a click and drag of the side button, and I can store all my &#8220;clippings&#8221; in an accessible folder for later review.</p>
<p>Things I wish it had:<br />
- E-library<br />
- Free in-store reading!  That&#8217;s a really awesome thing about the nook.  Granted, Amazon doesn&#8217;t have a &#8220;store&#8221; but it would be great if they could work out a deal with Starbucks or something.  I would love that.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why I Write Science Fiction by Regan Leigh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Regan Leigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 12:50:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;...catch the faint scent of fire and burnt wood on her breath.&quot;  Love that. :) Very much.

I&#039;ve always... always been pulled towards paranormal or magic realism elements. I like reality with spice or subtle escapism.  I love books that can keep me grounded and feeling as if those odd things could really happen.

I never write JUST romance, but all my stories also have to involve some sort of romance on the side because I thrive off of character relationships and dynamics.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;&#8230;catch the faint scent of fire and burnt wood on her breath.&#8221;  Love that. :) Very much.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve always&#8230; always been pulled towards paranormal or magic realism elements. I like reality with spice or subtle escapism.  I love books that can keep me grounded and feeling as if those odd things could really happen.</p>
<p>I never write JUST romance, but all my stories also have to involve some sort of romance on the side because I thrive off of character relationships and dynamics.</p>
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